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02 December 2007 @ 09:41 am
Is this over the top?  
So, is saying something like this too over the top? "Red Stone's unique beaded yarns have won top awards at major wool festivals across the country including the Taos Wool Festival, the Estes Park Wool Market, the Maryland Sheep and Wool Festival, and the Black Sheep Gathering." I also included a ribbon collage pic.

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I've added that and a bunch of other descriptions on my test site - http://www.handspunyarn.org Let me know if you find any typos or stuff...

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tedeisensteintedeisenstein on December 2nd, 2007 05:38 pm (UTC)
It sounds fine to me: honest, forthright, no bragging, just the simple truth. In other words, good advertising.

(Edited:) Might it be a good idea to replace "across the country" with "across the U.S.", just in case you get hits from those outside our borders? You never know with some people; they might think "huh. she's won ribbons here in Kazakhisflouristanovitz."

Edited at 2007-12-03 01:18 am (UTC)
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